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Updated my title page please check it out and let me know...

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What you think about it. I've gone through numerous designs some worse than others.

I think though I've hit the nail on the head with simple but catchy on this one. The rest of the pages are still the same except for the title page.

Anyway would appreciate any comments on it. Like it, Hate it, loads too slow, too plain. Let me know please.

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Question: What is the background image of?
Comment/Idea: I like the building in the background! What about adding a cross-hair in the middle were the pictures meet.
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The background image is of my game Titan-IC. I've posted several WIP screenshots of it in the Game Designs thread here on the RF forum.

The crosshair idea has crossed my mind I may try to put it in the center of the screen.

Thanks for your comments.
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i dont know why, but every time i visit your site, i cant view the images. All that shows up is a bunch of really big, pixelated smiley face .gif's, that lead to more smiley face .gif's when i click on them.
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Must be something setup with your browser or something. I can view the images fine and nobody else has had any problems.

I've also viewed it in both Internet Explorer and Firefox.

What browser are you using?
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It probably is something to do with the settings on your browser. Because I think you can set it to were it won't display images from an untrusted site or one with out a certificate.
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I tried it in Mozilla and IE, but i still get the same thing. I'll try looking into my security settings.
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Looks good cept theres a lot of empty space towards the bottom. I like the black and white pic and then a colored next to it. Maybe have the b/w then another colored pic then under them have a colored and the colored of the first. Then something in the middle.
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