Reality Factory

I have thought this for a about half years and now I just have to choose will I do this or not.I have invented my game name and story and the story is here:
You are 24 years old women/man and you have get out from prison.First what you mind get is to go to your childhood's town, and there you see that your buddies have conquerd your blocks ( not conquerd but I hope that you get the idea ) Now story comes to three stories:
Player can choose is he or she a police, gang man or does he/she belong to mafia.
This is just first chapter of my story and if you have ideas about this please let me know because this is going to take for a long time when i even get a first beta.

I think it is unlogical that an escaped prisoner can get a policeman/woman. The rest is okay i think, but why not make a 24 year old guy tell how he got into the world of crime with 15 years?("Hey kid, can you get this package to 4th street, you will even get cash for it?")